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?陽太?に出逢ぅまでゎ…??

• 1:

  ?まぁ?

  始めまして?小説書くの初めてで上手く書けるかゎからなぃですが読んで頂けたら嬉しぃです???

  2005-10-08 02:40:00
• 13:

  名無しさん

  具体的に
  ?小文字を使う
  ?だらだらと長いから改行して欲しい
  ?記号↓??使うと文章が軽くてうすっぺらく思える

  2005-10-08 05:13:00
• 14:

  ?まぁ?

  名無しさん 小文字はなるべく使わないよぅにしてるんですけど素が出てしまって(>_

  2005-10-08 05:22:00
• 15:

  ?まぁ?

  《その日の夜》
  今日泊まりに行けなかった代わりにぇみがあたしの家に泊まってくれる事になった。
  けど、ぇみとこんな長い時間喋るのは始めてなので寝るのがもったいなくて寝れなかった。

  2005-10-08 05:39:00
• 16:

  名無しさん

  >>1〜14

  2005-10-08 06:37:00
• 17:

  名無しさん

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  2005-10-08 06:42:00
• 18:

  名無しさん

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  2005-10-08 06:43:00
• 19:

  削除

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• 20:

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  2005-10-08 06:45:00
• 21:

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• 22:

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  2005-10-08 06:46:00